My first poem

[IndieSoul]

This is my first poem. I wrote it in summer 2006, when I was 11.

I Need to Cry

I need to cry,
get rid of all the tears.
Everything I've been holding back,
all my worries and fears

I need to cry,
release what I feel inside.
Say what has been left forgotten,
show what I've tried to hide

I really need to cry,
realyze it's true.
Just hope I never lose my feeling
of trust and hope in you.

I need you now, more than ever
to fill my lonely heart.
My love in you continues on.
It has right from the start.

[Daisychain]

I really enjoyed reading that indie :)

Thanks so much for sharing :arms:

[IndieSoul]

Thanks :) I know it's really short and simple, but maybe that's a good thing.

[Jenny]

Wow that's amazing, especially as you were only 11 when you wrote it. You are really talented and i hope you'll keep writing and sharing here (if you want) x

[IndieSoul]

Thank you Jenny, I will :)