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Old 6th June 2010, 05:04 PM
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Hi everyone, I dreamt this poem a week ago, it was so clear in my mind I wrote it down as soon as I woke so I wouldn't forget it.

I titled it after - I feel it may be to do with working with clients about "new beginnings" lately. I would love to hear what you think of it and if you ever dream poems or stories?

A SECOND CHANCE

I had a lucid dream called LIFE
And with it fell to Earth.
A snowflake rush of leaden soft
Lost in new found birth

A childlike bliss that found new eyes
and heard the chimes of rain
Through all of this I fell, to taste
that once what was,
was yet again.

Revealed to me the sense of touch
as Light caressed my skin
and smelled the leaves atop of trees
a new life to begin

And so I woke to find myself
upon the planet Earth
Pearlescent child in new found skies
My life with new found Worth
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Old 6th June 2010, 08:24 PM
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Wow that's really good, and amazing that you dreamt it. Thank you for sharing.. and keep on sharing if you'd like, I'd love to read more from you x
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Old 6th June 2010, 09:50 PM
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I'll second that.....................and no I don't dream in poetry...unfortunately!
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Thats truly beautiful.. and no me either.. never dreamt poetry..wish I could..

Thankyou for sharing Marlene.
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What a beautiful poem Marlene!! I love it, thanks for sharing it
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